It would be good to have a native English speaker (i.e. not me) to proofread the page, it looks quite good and checking spelling and grammar could help.
Page Home
- imbalanced whitespace around the map. Could the map potentially stretch more and have title above/below? Or having a bit more information/graphics next to it - maybe some very brief important information like the population count or something? (we might prefer not having too much text though) Or potentially put it on the bottom of the page in the center and it might not disturb the visitor too much if there is white space on the sides because it is the end of the page?
Page Scripture -> Bible translation
- imbalanced whitespace (especially around pictures), I might first consider making those sections narrower and see how the balance would change
- The gaps between some sections seem quite larger in mobile view, could you trust to reduce them and see how it would look on both mobile and PC?
Page Community Hub -> Mashi Culture
- it looks like some pictures in the gallery are duplicates. Could you maybe add different pictures and reduce the duplicates? Unless the duplicates are desired...
Page Scripture -> YouVersion
- what is the purpose of this page? You already have a Bible page for visitors. If you want to mention that the translation is available on YouVersion, I wonder if it might not be better to mention it briefly somewhere else, like at the end of Bible page or having a section of interesting links and resource etc. The testimony video could then go together with this, especially if it had appropriate space, like on the Bible page maybe
Pdf Heart of Man
- have you tried any sort of pdf compression? There are tools online, we can look at them together. It took me a while to load the 7MB pdf, and that might be too much waiting for a person (they might potentially think, that it doesn't work and go to another content)
Page Community Hub -> Neighborhood visuals
- I guess this page is not yet finished? It would be good to add some comment to the images, like what sort of building is there, what's it used for etc. Regarding the other picture, is that something that you normally see? Is there a baby as well? Is it pulled by a donkey, horse, cow? (maybe most of these are obvious to people, but some comment would be nice)
Pages under Bible dedication
- have you considered merging these two pages into one?
- otherwise the gallery looks really nice
Page Films -> Walking with Jesus
- nice structure, like it!
Overall I like the many pictures, but I lack more description of the events, people, places in the pictures.
Also the many multimedia materials provided for the people is very nice and the pages don't seem too cluttered, however occasionally there might be imabalanced whitespace.
You'll also need to do all the translations.
